Saturday, January 3, 2015

thousand arboretums visit to record


thousand arboretums visit to record
New Year's Day stanza, we are an a , mutually invite to thousand arboretums to play.
huge crowd in the garden of festival, noisy uncommon.Saying to is thousand arboretums is actually a plant garden, Be just garden is like also an archduke park.Your lo don't have a large pleasure ground in the bush.I go straight to a pleasure ground but go with younger brother Yu.The children lining up the Xi Xi Rang Rang, the row has long dragon, we also the troops that joined them of the no time for waiting ground.Was very not easy to buy to play a ticket, we happily sat "airship", drove "vessel", sat "Ferris wheel" and opened "touch a car" ……have fun"so happy as to forget home and duty"ly.
Mom and Dad's mama call us and arrive at thousand arboretums, should visit understanding for a while garden, can not close to attend to have fun.Hence, I follow a father mother to start to stroll a garden together with younger brother Yu., Garden originally and very greatly and very big, the tree here is the category still really many, various tree connects into one and seem green natural cover, green tree become Yin, plus small bridge flowing water in the garden, green jade lake boating of special setting, make thousand arboretums entirely different to have the scene of special feature only.
arrive thousand arboretums to play, place oneself green ocean, can breathe fresh air, and can heartily play, is really too stick!
some day, the teacher makes us write a half to open sex composition, the topic says for 《I worship my mother most of-》 < br/> the second day, teacher very helplessly walking platform:"I know that you write the docile that I worship my mother most , generous, cleverness what of get fed up with writing, but, you anyway can not write, either'I worship my mother's kid most '!" The question in composition test testing in every year is usually teachers and the students, parent with to the focus of society concern, however test behind from grade examination papers the information that the section acquires always don't exert satisfied, even very not equal to idea.The beginning and end of problem should get to the process of composition teaching in look for. Though question in composition test pattern how turn over lately, the requested literary style always records a Xu text.This is reasonable, match regulation.The text that is so-called to record Xu is to record a person and recount, write a view, is a person, affairs and scenery in writing, is the emersion of person, affairs and scenery.So well record a Xu text have to record a person, recount, write a view to attain image first, concrete and vivid.This is 1 from prepare a beginning beginning and then have to gradually have of foundation effort.However our composition teachings are at the first stage usually is neglect even is seriously neglected the development of this foundation effort.Have no or lacked this foundation effort, so record inevitable empty talk of Xu text to connect thin bone Ling of article Ding, make people can't move people, either to the realistic feeling, talk to not and bestly record a Xu text naturally. So where does this foundation effort come from?The composition teaching of junior high school would guide student's academic association to observe a life in the beginning and developed the habit and ability of observation life.Record the image of Xu, concrete, vivid, is the careful and thoughtful inevitable reflection of observation.So should make use of various means guides in this stage composition teaching the student learn to observe his/her own life, this is a world of all inclusive:The facilities in the classroom, the outline and color of teaching mansion, hoist a flag each link of morning exercise, the noisy and vigorous condition of sports games, plants in hospital in the school etc.;Is gradual again open their range of experience extension:The street of raging river of cars and trucks, in a hurry and up and down the crowd of class, new China bookstore inside people are absorbed in to browse and buy the expression of book, the natural tremendous landscape lovely view of the tourist attraction etc.;Gradually guide them again to observe an affair, an affairs, observe their start, process, result, this is to guide them to study to recount;Again be guide their observer, observe parents, classmate and teacher, observe their appearance, language of expression and deal with affairs various details of behavior.Thus, the parents, classmate and teacher is all living image in their heart, write in the composition the ability is lifelike. On this foundation, arriving the empress stage of junior high school will make the student know, a truely and excellently record a Xu text still must be is richer than a content, can give people to inspire.But this kind of content isn't an in addition of, substantial is observation life of a kind of insight.For example the flower blossomed and thanked, the road of champion, helpless failure etc., any thing development varieties all have its proper basis, all have it the philosophy for containing.Observed, discovered, your recorded a Xu text to there is also abundant content. The period of the summer vacation, beginning three students want to want to write a good composition, should value development and exaltation and cautiously observe living habit and ability by himself/herself and study how to record the Xu to the person, affairs concrete, image, vivid.

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